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ROBBIE COBURN’s The Foal in the Wire is the deeply moving and inspiring story of Sam, his love for a girl and the horse that brings them together. Read on for an extract.

EXTRACT

Foal

As I run down the veranda steps

in the dark

I can still hear them screaming

at each other

inside the house.

he doesn’t love her

and she doesn’t love him

but they stay.

I wish my words could change us,

teach our bodies to know

one another differently —

I want to teach him to love her

the way he can teach a horse to run

in the right direction.

I wish you could change

people’s behaviour

like you can with a horse.

I know they blame me

for holding them

together here.

I try to be invisible.

as I walk down the path

towards the horse track

I notice the stillness of the farm

as their voices fade into the distance.

no sound but the wind

through the grasses of the paddocks

on every side.

on the farm’s border, I see

there is a girl standing at the fence.

Julia.

the girl my age

from the next property.

we have spoken before

but in this darkness

our bodies are strangers.

Sam.

I can hear her call my name,

hear the ache of her voice

willing me towards her.

as I meet her eyes

at the paddock’s edge

I see she is standing

over a wounded foal.

I can smell the blood

and hear the panicked breathing —

hers and my own

and the faltering breath

of the injured foal

tangled in barbed wire,

the trembling shape

of a body in the grass.

Cutting Wire

Pressing my foot on the lowest wire

of the fence

I make a space for my body

and climb through

to the other side,

careful the wire doesn’t

burrow further

into the foal’s flesh.

it’s caught.

we have to cut the wire.

Julia turns and moves

through the dark grass

of the paddock

towards a shed

in the distance.

alone with the foal,

I lie down beside it

and run my hand gently

across its neck.

there are small furrows

caked with dried blood

where the barbs

have pierced the skin.

the foal raises its head slightly

and looks at me, confused.

I can see the pain welling up

behind its eyes.

I rest my head

on its flank

and feel its laboured breathing,

I hover my fingers over

the open wounds

and wish I could give the foal

my body.

I won’t let anybody hurt you.

you can’t hurt a body

that is beyond reach.

Julia returns

with the wire-cutters.

Do you think it was waiting for us?

I’ve never seen it before.

the foal must have broken

into the paddock

from one of the

neighbouring properties

in the distance.

I haven’t seen it before either —

I wonder how far it must have stumbled

to find itself here.

a dam would never leave her foal alone.

it must have walked off and become lost

taking a narrow path

somehow

its mother couldn’t follow.

I hope our parents will think

the wire was torn

by a cow breaking

through the fence.

I remove my jacket

and lay it on the grass,

pushing it beneath

the foal’s body.

it stirs slightly

when I reach across its back

and feel the cold wire

against my palms

as I wrap my hands

around it.

Julia cuts the wire

and I slowly lift it from the foal’s neck.

we roll the fragile creature over

until its body rests

on the jacket.

we take one side

of the jacket each

and together we pull

the wounded animal free.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Robbie-coburn-authorRobbie Coburn is a contemporary Australian poet. His poems have been published widely in magazines and anthologies and his books include Ghost Poetry (2024), And I Could Not Have Hurt You (2023) and The Other Flesh (2019). He has been featured at The Wheeler Centre and La Mama Poetica, appeared as a guest at literary festivals including the Sydney Writers’ Festival, Canberra Writers Festival, Newcastle Writers Festival and Perth Poetry Festival, and run poetry workshops for youth mental health organisation Headspace.

Visit Robbie Coburn’s website

The Foal in the Wire
Our Rating: (4/5)
Author: Coburn, Robbie
Category: Children's, teenage & educational
Publisher: Lothian Children's Books
ISBN: 75-9780734423603
RRP: 19.99
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